To everyone who registered on the blog for On Silver Wings, feel free to post comments and criticism on any and all chapters. The -draft chapters especially, since they are chapters which haven’t yet been screened by my extremely patient and talented beta-readers.
If you have ideas, please share them; if you spot errors or weak bits, feel free to point them out in a most violent and direct way.
Thank you! :)
EDIT: Be sure to use the new “fullscreen” button at the top of the chapter pages, they make reading a lot easier!